A WAIT FOR THE TIME TO COME
A WAIT FOR THE SUN TO RISE
TO BE FREE OF THOUGHTS
TO FEEL THE WARMTH
TO WALK ON THORNS
TO FACE THE REALITY.
A WAIT FOR THE TIME TO COME
TO HEAR WHAT’S NOT SAID
TO PIN THE BUBBLES OF ENERGY
TO BRAVE THE UNKNOWN
TO ENJOY THE SCENES
TO EMBRACE THE BREEZE.
A WAIT FOR THE TIME TO COME
TO FEEL THE PAIN
TO RELAX IN THE SHADOWS
TO LOOSEN DOWN WORRIES
TO REKINDLE FEELINGS
TO FIND MYSELF IN CROWDS.
A WAIT FOR THE TIME TO COME
TO WIPE AWAY TEARS
TO SEE THE END OF THINGS
TO BOW DOWN TO THE FORCES
TO BE LOST IN DREAMS
TO BE THE SELF THAT WAS ME.
Wednesday, December 30, 2009
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28 comments:
good one..really very nice...keep it up... :)
Nice poem dude....
specially the last line "TO BE THE SELF THAT WAS ME." .... touched my heart...
all the while we try to impersonate our idols...whoever they may be....n simply forget who we ourselves are...feeling lost when we look back....
a wait 4 the time to come
to see u with long hairs
n u tell someont tht u cares
to c u wid ur girlfrnd
n someaday give party to ur frnds..........
.....there is some more additions bt i will update them periodically......
@sud :true
@sanjay : c wit lon beard .... ;)
dude u need to fall in love..hehe ;)
nice attempt..love the theme :)
no its ur long hairs on ur head...u fool
from where did u copy them dude.....
@nice devil:sum tips plz....
@sriram:dude dats original feelins!!
gr8.... re.... nice theme... "I wait for time to come..."...
one line from me....
I just wait for time, the "Time"... which is truely mine...
~rohit k
tell ur all beloved frnds to comment on ur poem( which is copied according to sriramamurthy )....n my addition 2...ok....
.......pls comment on mine lines also.....
@sanjay:tell ppl 2 read n comment!!!!
now we r introducing abhrajeet-the poet.
simply aw-wait for it-some.
--prabhat
Truly wonderful. The search for an inner soul becomes even more pronounced in these uphill times.
@parag::dese r downhill tyms...
@prabhat::thanx bhai...keep watchin...
no time to wait....
Hey nice one man ... literally!
nice1 abra...jst loved reading it...keep writing...
nice one abra...didn't know about this side of yours...keep it up...
amazin......full of true emotions
good one ..
GR8 DUDE!!
A wait for the time..
when i wander freely..
when i fly up to sky...
when i become a kid again...
when i rule the time..
when my life is only mine...
howss it...
urs is far too good!!
@evry1::thanx evry1...if u lyk do subscribe 2 rss feeds..KEEP VISITIN !! :)
@ankit: its gud,...who is it in ur lyf?? ;-)
@abhrajeet...y u saying that...do u need some one to motivate or inspire u...
i dont need anyone..
so there's no one in my life...
:)
@ankit::its dda absence of sum1 ,i gess , dat inspires such feelins... :P
n i blieve u said "A wait for the time..
when my life is only mine... " dats why my ques..;)
it approaches everyones life...in someway...or other..
doubting the poems is doubting the credibility of the genuine feelings...
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